Next one in English
There's another world inside me
That you may never see
There're secrets in this life
That I can't hide
Somewhere in this darkness
There's a light that I can't find
Maybe it's too far away...
Or maybe I'm just blind...
Still working on this one,,
As soon as I complete it will post the entire one once again
Guys help me out...
That you may never see
There're secrets in this life
That I can't hide
Somewhere in this darkness
There's a light that I can't find
Maybe it's too far away...
Or maybe I'm just blind...
Still working on this one,,
As soon as I complete it will post the entire one once again
Guys help me out...
posted by Rocky at 10:05 AM
3 Comments:
great beginning!!
one good thing is that u dint try to stick to the rhyme ,that makes it natural. try and see if u can write an equally good second half :)
whistle whistle.. great poem from you.. what inspired you to write this?
Inspiration can come in many ways..
All you need to do is to look for them
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